ANOTHER BEGINNING
Sat, Mar 3, 2007
A thick silky fog swept through the street that had only one lamp post to leave a blemish of a light on its hard trodden surface. Beside the lamp post, a lazy bench rested, having lost one of its legs torn away by some mischievous young souls, replaced by a distorted pile of red bricks. The morning was too young, unpolluted by the sun’s rays.
The watchman, after a long night’s journey, was ready to fall into the land of dreamless hibernation. The newspaper man, on the contrary, rode his bicycle through the street with his drowsy eyes, ringing the bell whemently as he passes through the wavering silhouette of the watchman. The doors of the grocery shop were slit open by the shopkeeper whose hands were agonizingly shivering with cold that penetrated through his body when he touched the freezing handle. Asim, the 12 year old seventh grader, sleepwalked along the footpath, drowsy, avoiding the bench and almost hitting the lamp post; today was his day to set up the desks before everybody shows up in the classroom.
I woke up early and even before I could open my eyes, I frisked around my bed table for my cell phone. There was no message, there was no missed call. She said she would be the first one to wish me; I thought there was still time. I slipped into a cardigan and walked out the door.
I picked up the paper sat down on the bench. Asim reappeared from the grainy smog, rushing towards the bench, “Amir bhaai, happy birthday” he said in a heavily breathed voice, “see you in the afternoon” and he disappeared again. She wasn’t going to be the first one now; still it was a good start. “Oh, it’s your birthday” the watchman overheard the news, “well, congratulations”, I don’t think he had ever wished anybody that before. ”Oey Hanif, get Amir babu a warm cup of special coffee with extra cream, its his big day today.” Iqbal, the grocery guy yelled from his shop to the coffee stand a few yards away and then turned his face towards me, “And Amir babu, happy birthday; foggy, cloudy and cold, it sure is your day.” I looked back at him and chuckled.
The day went by and she didn’t call, no message no words. Each minute, every moment slipped away in utter silence; not even the sound of my own footsteps polluted it. It didn’t make me sad, it didn’t make me angry, it didn’t surprise me, it didn’t hurt me; it just happened to me.
In the night, when the clock was about to strike 12, I switched off the light and went to bed; when a faint knock at the door was followed by a whispering shout, “Hey Amir bhaai, happy birthday” I heard Asim as he ran away laughing.I smiled and tucked my face in the blanket.
It was a good beginning to end the day.












March 5th, 2007 at 4:18 pm
:: Happy belated B’Day Amro ::
Wish you all the success and the happiest life everafter..
I hope I (was) the first,, at least here !
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March 16th, 2007 at 5:40 am
hey amir! oh crap! i forgot ur bday n just today i realized tht i did!
:p is tht way u rote tht story
btw i can soooooooooooooooooo relate to it cus u knw…………! love the way u write! rock on buddy! u r deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee best!
June 27th, 2007 at 6:35 am
Amir u always live in past. What about ur recent bday. Is there anyone who awoke just for you at night to congratulate u?Can’t that day become the part of ur fiction?